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Issue 51460043: Web: Text-input: make LM reference more friendly.

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Created:
10 years, 3 months ago by uliska
Modified:
10 years, 3 months ago
Reviewers:
Graham Percival
CC:
lilypond-devel_gnu.org
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Public.

Description

Web: Text-input: make LM reference more friendly. I think putting it this way sounds less defensive or arrogant. I think it is better to combine the two paragraphs because this section was somewhat jaggy.

Patch Set 1 #

Total comments: 4

Patch Set 2 : Incorporate suggestion by Graham #

Patch Set 3 : Incorporate one more suggestion #

Unified diffs Side-by-side diffs Delta from patch set Stats (+3 lines, -3 lines) Patch
M Documentation/web/introduction.itexi View 1 2 1 chunk +3 lines, -3 lines 0 comments Download

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Total messages: 5
uliska
How about that? It doesn't include David's latest suggestions (because I was already ready with ...
10 years, 3 months ago (2014-01-13 13:03:08 UTC) #1
Graham Percival
https://codereview.appspot.com/51460043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi File Documentation/web/introduction.itexi (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/51460043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1138 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1138: before they come up! Occasionally new users are unnecessarily ...
10 years, 3 months ago (2014-01-16 07:53:40 UTC) #2
uliska
Incorporate suggestion by Graham
10 years, 3 months ago (2014-01-18 10:05:04 UTC) #3
uliska
Incorporate one more suggestion
10 years, 3 months ago (2014-01-18 10:08:44 UTC) #4
uliska
10 years, 3 months ago (2014-01-18 10:10:01 UTC) #5
https://codereview.appspot.com/51460043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction...
File Documentation/web/introduction.itexi (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/51460043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction...
Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1138: before they come up!  Occasionally
new users are unnecessarily
On 2014/01/16 07:53:40, Graham Percival wrote:
> I prefer keeping a paragraph break here, since that makes the next sentence
> easier to see.

Done.

https://codereview.appspot.com/51460043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction...
Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1139: irritated by some aspects of
LilyPond's behaviour.  Please read
On 2014/01/16 07:53:40, Graham Percival wrote:
> I suggest using "unnecessarily confused" rather than "irritated".

Done.
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