Issue 48360044: Web:Background: Reword introductory paragraph

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Issue 48360044: Web:Background: Reword introductory paragraph (Closed)

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Created:
10 years, 4 months ago by uliska

Modified:
10 years, 3 months ago

Reviewers:
Graham Percival, janek

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lilypond-devel_gnu.org

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Web:Background: Reword introductory paragraph I've always found this page confusing because I didn't understand why there is this "placeholder" page. This commit addresses this by making the "manual" issue explicit. Additionally I consider it more useful to _first_ tell the reader what it is and _then_ advise him to skip the essay instead of _immediately_ telling him "Probably you won't want to read this". If it is necessary to have the link at the end of a paragraph (and not only of a sentence) I'd simply insert a new paragraph after the link.

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Created: 10 years, 4 months ago

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	M	Documentation/web/introduction.itexi	View		1 chunk	+5 lines, -3 lines	1 comment	Download

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janek

10 years, 4 months ago (2014-01-09 20:34:49 UTC) #3

LGTM

https://codereview.appspot.com/48360044/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction...
File Documentation/web/introduction.itexi (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/48360044/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction...
Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:554: This is interesting reading if you are
interested in an in-depth
there are two 'interesting' in this sentence.  Maybe change first one to
'informative'? (just a suggestion, not a requirement)

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