CG: add new instructions for LilyDev 3 (issue 2538)

CG: add new instructions for LilyDev 3 (issue 2538)

[pkx166h, 2014-09-23 07:58:03]

Thanks Federico.

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
File Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:28: be burnt to a DVD or copied into
a USB stick and installed like any
.. or copied to a USB ... (I don't know why, but copied 'into' doesn't sound
right) :)

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:128: in the virtual machine
settings: clic on @clicksequence{System @click{} Processor}
'click' not 'clic'.

Also I try not to break lines when enclosed in a TexInfo command i.e. 

@clicksequence{....} is all on one line

As it causes odd output in the PDF. Although I think this is only applies to
TexInfo commands that link to other sections.

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:145: remember just one password.}
@warning{If the root password is left blank when prompted, the configured user
account will be be given root privileges automatically.  This means that only
one password needs to be remembered.}

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:156: This will take about 10 minutes
in a recent computer.
'..recent computer' is wrong. But I think we could just remove this line.

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:159: When the installation is
completed, just click on Continue (you
'When the installation is complete, ...' or '..has completed,..' either works.

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/sou...
File Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/sou...
Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi:219: If you are not using LilyDev
>=3.1, you may need to install the
If you are not using the most recent version of LilyDev ...

(then we don't have to care about numbers - if someone is reading whatever
version of the CG this appears in then they can assume that the version referred
to here is the latest one). If they already have an earlier version LilyDev
installed and are reading this then you can assume they are already up and
running so this would not apply anyway.

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/sou...
Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi:221: worth it.  After installation
you must log out of the session
"After installation you must log out, and then log back in again to enable it."

(just in case someone infers this as exiting out of a terminal session they have
open within their login.

[fedelogy, 2014-09-23 23:20:53]

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
File Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:128: in the virtual machine
settings: clic on @clicksequence{System @click{} Processor}
On 2014/09/23 07:58:02, J_lowe wrote:
> 
> Also I try not to break lines when enclosed in a TexInfo command i.e. 
> 
> @clicksequence{....} is all on one line
> 

it is already on one line
mislead by html fluid line breaking?

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:145: remember just one password.}
On 2014/09/23 07:58:02, J_lowe wrote:
> @warning{If the root password is left blank when prompted, the configured user
> account will be be given root privileges automatically.  This means that only
> one password needs to be remembered.}

Acknowledged.

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:156: This will take about 10 minutes
in a recent computer.
On 2014/09/23 07:58:03, J_lowe wrote:
> '..recent computer' is wrong. But I think we could just remove this line.

Done.

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/qui...
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:159: When the installation is
completed, just click on Continue (you
On 2014/09/23 07:58:03, J_lowe wrote:
> 'When the installation is complete, ...' or '..has completed,..' either works.

Done.

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/sou...
File Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/sou...
Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi:219: If you are not using LilyDev
>=3.1, you may need to install the
On 2014/09/23 07:58:03, J_lowe wrote:
> If you are not using the most recent version of LilyDev ...
> 
> (then we don't have to care about numbers - if someone is reading whatever
> version of the CG this appears in then they can assume that the version
referred
> to here is the latest one).

I agree in general, but bash-completion is not installed in current and unique
version available. I'll add it in the next ISO I'll generate when I've received
some more feedback and there are substantial changes.
I'll rephrase it to leave version numbers out.

[fedelogy, 2014-09-23 23:34:52]

followed James' tips