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Issue 2316042: Doc: NR 4.1.2: Reorganize vertical dimensions. (Closed)

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13 years, 6 months ago by Mark Polesky
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13 years, 6 months ago
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Doc: NR 4.1.2: Reorganize vertical dimensions.

Patch Set 1 #

Total comments: 11

Patch Set 2 : Make requested changes. #

Patch Set 3 : Doc: NR 4.1.2: Correct 'stretchability entry. #

Unified diffs Side-by-side diffs Delta from patch set Stats (+138 lines, -107 lines) Patch
M Documentation/notation/spacing.itely View 1 2 2 chunks +138 lines, -107 lines 0 comments Download

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Total messages: 18
Mark Polesky
The vertical dimensions docs in NR 4.1.2 "Page formatting" are (in my opinion) incredibly confusing. ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-02 06:06:06 UTC) #1
Trevor Daniels
Looks a lot clearer to me, Mark, but I can't vouch for the accuracy as ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-02 08:51:35 UTC) #2
perpeduumimmobile
Hi, Mark, very nice work, and this is indeed a lot easier to read. I ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-02 09:17:15 UTC) #3
Mark Polesky
http://codereview.appspot.com/2316042/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2316042/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode200 Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:200: @table @code On 2010/10/02 09:17:16, perpeduumimmobile wrote: > Hm. ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-02 16:09:22 UTC) #4
Carl
On 2010/10/02 16:09:22, Mark Polesky wrote: On 2010/10/02 09:17:16, perpeduumimmobile wrote: > > Again, it's ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-02 16:32:06 UTC) #5
t.daniels_treda.co.uk
markpolesky wrote Saturday, October 02, 2010 5:09 PM > Okay, here we go... > > ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-02 22:48:39 UTC) #6
Mark Polesky
On 2010/10/02 16:32:06, Carl wrote: > When laying out a page, LilyPond makes a stack ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-03 02:49:30 UTC) #7
Carl
On 2010/10/03 02:49:30, Mark Polesky wrote: > On 2010/10/02 16:32:06, Carl wrote: > > When ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-03 03:08:54 UTC) #8
joeneeman
On Sat, Oct 2, 2010 at 8:08 PM, <Carl.D.Sorensen@gmail.com> wrote: > On 2010/10/03 02:49:30, Mark ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-03 04:50:12 UTC) #9
Graham Percival (old account)
On 2010/10/03 04:50:12, joeneeman wrote: > On Sat, Oct 2, 2010 at 8:08 PM, <mailto:Carl.D.Sorensen@gmail.com> ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-03 16:20:04 UTC) #10
Graham Percival (old account)
LGTM, although I have no knowledge of the spacing code. http://codereview.appspot.com/2316042/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2316042/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode198 ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-03 16:26:35 UTC) #11
Mark Polesky
I've uploaded a new patch set for review, but I still have some questions. First, ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-03 17:59:40 UTC) #12
c_sorensen
On 10/2/10 10:50 PM, "Joe Neeman" <joeneeman@gmail.com> wrote: > > On Sat, Oct 2, 2010 ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-03 18:26:14 UTC) #13
joeneeman
On Sun, Oct 3, 2010 at 11:26 AM, Carl Sorensen <c_sorensen@byu.edu> wrote: > On 10/2/10 ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-03 19:53:18 UTC) #14
joeneeman
On Sun, Oct 3, 2010 at 10:59 AM, <markpolesky@gmail.com> wrote: > I've uploaded a new ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-03 20:09:17 UTC) #15
Mark Polesky
Latest patch set up. Okay to push? - Mark
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-03 23:36:17 UTC) #16
joeneeman
On Sun, Oct 3, 2010 at 4:36 PM, <markpolesky@gmail.com> wrote: > Latest patch set up. ...
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-04 00:55:37 UTC) #17
perpeduumimmobile
13 years, 6 months ago (2010-10-04 11:11:58 UTC) #18
In short: great work, push it.  Two slight remarks on skylines (I prefer the
wording in your answer on my post), and perhaps about Hooke's law.  But I don't
have a strong point on the latter.


On 2010/10/02 16:09:22, Mark Polesky wrote:
> Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:200: @table @code
> On 2010/10/02 09:17:16, perpeduumimmobile wrote:
> > Hm. As long as vertical spacing is not absolutely
> > bullet-proof specified, I don't like to see this
> > sections deleted. [...]
> Are you saying you'd prefer to define the four keys individually
> for each of the eight variables?

Okay, I withdraw...  I somehow thought there are places where markups have their
"origin" on the top, and others on the bottom, but this is plainly wrong.  Looks
like this is still in a flux...  But when we have the natural choices, we should
include them in the docs.  (Distance USA - Portugal from L.A. ...)

> Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:239: the combined items.
> On 2010/10/02 09:17:16, perpeduumimmobile wrote:
> > Yes, but this somehow sounds like a rectangle you
> > can put between two staves or something, and this
> > is _not_ correct (because padding specifies
> > whitespace between the skylines).  I'm not sure
> > why we avoid the "skyline" term in the NR; it's
> > not too hard a concept IMHO.  But if we don't use
> > it, you might think again over this sentence.
> 
> Well, that's why I used the word "unobstructed".  But I could
> easily change it to: 
>   "the minimum required amount of unobstructed vertical whitespace
>   "between the skylines of the two items."
> Though that's slightly inaccurate, since markups don't have skylines, as far
as
> I know.  But the idea may be clearer anyway.

I'd prefer this, but that's just me...

> Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:246: reference point of a system is the
> middle line of the nearest
> On 2010/10/02 09:17:16, perpeduumimmobile wrote:
> > For markups, things are different (and yet to
> > specify).
> You mean code-wise, I presume (I did cover markups in this paragraph).

Yup.

> Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:248: @code{padding} or
> @code{minimum-distance} are not meaningful,
> On 2010/10/02 09:17:16, perpeduumimmobile wrote:
> > Yes, they are.  They can be stretched, and the
> > resulting space will be larger than padding or
> > minimum-distance.
> 
> "Yes they are meaningful", or "yes they are possible"?

"Yes they are possible."  I admit I can't tell you an example, but I'll never
say it will never be useful... ;-)

> Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:264: @code{+inf.0}.
> On 2010/10/02 09:17:16, perpeduumimmobile wrote:
> > Again, it's a reference.  We can mentioned Hooke's
> > law, don't we?
> 
> Okay, here we go... [...]

Oops, sorry.  I just meant a sentence like "stretchability is the inverse spring
constant in Hooke's law", perhaps in parenthesis; your explanation is perfect! 
It's just for those who already know the law that they have the right (or even
better) understanding from just one sentence.  I would not expect a physicist's
explanation of the law...

> I feel that simply mentioning Hooke's law does little to help the LilyPond
user

Well, not each and every one, but some of the users are math- and
science-addicts, and quite a number of them will have heard of the law.
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